[That gets her full attention. It’s almost startling.]
Then…[A short huff.] What the hell are you doing here? Can’t go find some ghost friends? [Which would be mockery, normally, but somehow not this time. It’s… almost curious?]
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[That gets her full attention. It’s almost startling.]
Then…[A short huff.] What the hell are you doing here? Can’t go find some ghost friends? [Which would be mockery, normally, but somehow not this time. It’s… almost curious?]